PeterDD
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I know exactly what you mean. My essays always read like a list of facts, not a smooth, flowing argument. My old strategy was just to start every body paragraph with "Another reason is..." or "Secondly..." which is SO boring and doesn't actually connect anything.
I had a tutor show me a trick that changed my life. She called it "The Bridge and Door" method.
Think of each paragraph as a room in a house.
"Another reason social media is bad is cyberbullying."
You could write:
End of paragraph: "...and this constant exposure to curated content is one major factor in declining mental health among teens."
Start of next paragraph: "Perhaps even more damaging than these curated images, however, is the direct harm caused by peer-to-peer cyberbullying, which has found a powerful new platform on these same sites."
See how "even more damaging" connects back to the previous point, and "direct harm" introduces the new one? It creates a flow. It takes practice, but it makes the essay feel like one coherent conversation instead of a series of disconnected shouts.
I had a tutor show me a trick that changed my life. She called it "The Bridge and Door" method.
Think of each paragraph as a room in a house.
- The last sentence of your previous paragraph is the door that leads out of that room. It should hint at what's coming next.
- The first sentence of your next paragraph is the bridge that welcomes you into the new room and reminds you why you're there.
"Another reason social media is bad is cyberbullying."
You could write:
End of paragraph: "...and this constant exposure to curated content is one major factor in declining mental health among teens."
Start of next paragraph: "Perhaps even more damaging than these curated images, however, is the direct harm caused by peer-to-peer cyberbullying, which has found a powerful new platform on these same sites."
See how "even more damaging" connects back to the previous point, and "direct harm" introduces the new one? It creates a flow. It takes practice, but it makes the essay feel like one coherent conversation instead of a series of disconnected shouts.
